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Issue 5 Poetry

Fernando

One specific suggestion I was given was to perhaps add roman numerals since my poem was split into two. I really liked the idea of more explicitly splitting the poem, for although it is one poem, it was written about two very different moments. I think this idea is captured and more obviously showcased when the poem is numbered and split.

Fernando I

Long legs and nervous smile;
Sandy brown hair and fidgeting hands;
Long fingers intertwined with mine,
delicately grasping air–

A universe is held between us
Where nothing else exists,
except our unabating pulse.

Its rhythm:
an unwavering source of life and death,

the end to all beginnings
within our closed palms.

Fernando II

Green eyes and batting lashes;
Pale emeralds in a sea of milk;

Fading anthuriums–

Soon,
their vermillion to become a distant memory,

just like the universe that is held between us, 

And Suddenly,
the world seems so small.