Author: Emily Jonas

[For] this poem she [the Writing Center tutor] mentioned to specify the train; add a description to the train or mention if it was a Metro or Amtrak. I am from Cincinnati, Ohio, and there is a train near my house. It blows its horn at night, but it’s a much different train than the Metro system here in Chicago. They have different sounds. Chicago is a noisy city. I live on the outskirts of Cincinnati, so it’s quiet and smaller. I like the unspecificity of the train because no matter where you are, if there is a train near you, you can imagine yourself listening to the train and feeling lost in time.

Lauren [Writing Center tutor] was very kind and I appreciated her giving me feedback on my poems. I only changed one thing, which was taking out the “we are the poets…” to “we are poets.” I feel like that small detail makes a difference. She also mentioned to go into further detail with describing how the ocean reflects dreamers’ thoughts and why the sky is their savior. I personally like the unspecificity of why. I think it allows for people who consider themselves dreamers to reflect on moments when they zone out or think deeply. For me, I think a lot when I am in nature. It’s also in nature that I find my creativity the most and inspiration.