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Issue 4 Poetry

Stargazing As An Ursidae

The poem had a beginning that focused on the action but had a weird switch to second person at the end, but luckily my tutor had a really nice suggestion to add a section at the beginning that references said second person; it felt more cohesive and less abrupt making that switch to “but then you look up.” The specificity of her [the tutor’s] ideas and questions for “oh, could you find a word for this” really helped me focus in on the lines in the piece that I felt could be altered to strengthen the central message rather than take away from it. Going forward, I think taking into consideration the impact spacing can have is something useful.

Laying out at the vista,
where water runs clear
where mountains peek through pine trees
The sky begins to blush
as the sun starts to set 

You think about
how it’s been said
and observed
that bears have an
understanding of natural beauty.

They’ve been spotted
sitting and staring
for hours on end,

enamored by the view.

And as night falls,
You can’t help but wonder,
Do bears admire the stars?

Contemplation of our constellations,
a meaning to existence,
a pondering of it all.
Paws ache with fascination,
catching salmon by day
existentialists by night.

So here you are
alone with the night, 
but then you look up
and remind yourself 

that somewhere out there
lies a bear,
misty-eyed with awe

gazing at these very same stars.


Brigid O’Brien is a rising junior at DePaul University, studying English and Screenwriting. She loves her poems and stories to explore the “minutiae of life,” with previous work featured in JAKE Magazine and Applause Literary Journal. When she’s not writing, Brigid loves walking cute (slobbery) dogs and people-watching on the L.