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Fiction Issue 4

Xennial Angst

After consulting with a member of the Writing Center, I made some specific changes to the dialogue in certain scenes of the screenplay. Having someone that I knew and respected tell me my dialogue, in certain scenes, didn’t sound natural made me go back and redo a lot of my wording. I made the dialogue sound more natural and even flowing. Having another respected peer read my script and give helpful feedback made for a much better work overall.

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Marty McCahill is a graduating grad student at DePaul. He is a dedicated father, writer, musician, and artist.