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Issue 7 Poetry

Poem Answering “Do you ski?”

My feedback gave me insight into how my language was interpreted, which allowed me to make unclear phrases more accessible. It also highlighted grammatical subversions that felt arbitrary and out of place. I think that, because my piece is poetry, the impression outweighs the explicit meaning.

To hear Paris spoken of like Texas
(both more magnet than

destination real people spend summers,
thousands on) has starved 

our collegiate grammar till it snaps.
We are all starving

artists, but still Europe’s mention traces
income’s half-smile,

flatlining. Guess 2008 is disease
in stages. In class

they taught us about how poor people die.
What is scarier: to know

the course of your illness or watch your life
end one dinner time?

I know that we are all symptomatic,
hell, look at our shoes.

At least they peel off feet instead of mouths. 
Still, if any mouth

eats any sole it will be mine and yours.   
And I am not poor

enough to complain about. Yet I am
not well-to-do trips

past Florida. This is not politics;
I am just blushing.

I blush for justness: equal Goldfish in cups
and adjective jobs

that do not kill your parents and a world
without measuring.

I will not flip the meritocratic
sandwich. Meat will be

meat will be eaten but first some of it 
will take ski trips and 

no, I’ve never been.